Draft 4

SCENE 1:

THEME MUSIC FADES IN, LASTS 30 SECONDS, FADE OUT.

 

SFX: INTERIOR HOUSE, FADED TELEVISION, BOILING PANS, AND GENERAL HOME SOUNDS. LOWER DURING DIALOGUE.

 

 

MOTHER

(SHOUTS) Harry, Georgia, dinner will be ready soon, go wash your hands please.

 

SFX: PLATES CLATTERING, WATER DRAINING.

DISTANT-

GEORGIA

Race you to the kitchen..

SFX: RUNNING FADES IN, LAUGHTER, CHILDREN SEATED AT THE TABLE, CHAIR DRAG.

GEORGIA

Will you come to the play mummy? I’m playing Gretel, that’s a big part with LOADS of words. Do you know the story of Hansel and Gretel mummy? …

LONG PAUSE

 

(AS TALKING GET FASTER) ….Well there’s a girl called Gretel – that’s me – and a boy called Hansel, that’s Thomas Brown, which I am not happy about because he has to play my brother and I want Harry to be Hansel because he is actually my brother.

HARRY

As if I’d act in a stupid childish play (muttered quietly/bitterly under breath).

GEORGIA

Hansel and Gretel are such funny names, it must be a really old story ‘cause I don’t know anyone with those names. Why not call them something else like Rihanna or Beyonce, something good. (DEEP BREATH) Well anyway I have to….

MOTHER

Georgia will you just keep quiet and eat your dinner! (SIGH) I’m trying to sort all these bills…

SFX: PAPER RUSTLE, CLATTER AS CUTLERY SCRAPES THE PLATES.

 

SCENE 2:

SFX: SAME AS SCENE 1, NOW ALSO PHONE RINGS.

 

MOTHER

Hello….

(PAUSE)

Work, when?

(PAUSE)

Well, I will have to see if someone can look after the kids.

SFX: RUSTLE PAPERS.

(SIGH)..Yes, sir, okay, sir, I’ll be in soon.

SFX: PHONE BEEPING AS PRESSING BUTTONS.

MOTHER

Hi Sally, are you busy?…

Oh right, not to worry then. Just I’ve been called into work….

Yeah okay, well I hope your mum gets better soon..

SFX: PHONE BEEP AS CALL ENDED.

SFX: PHONE BEEPING AS PRESSING BUTTONS.

MOTHER

Hello David, is Chrissie there?….

Hi Chrissie it’s Katy, are you busy?…

I’ve been called into work….

I see, okay, well we’ll catch up soon….

SFX: PHONE BEEP AS CALL ENDED.

MOTHER
(exasperated sigh)

 

HARRY

Are you okay mum? (Concerned)

MOTHER

Yes, I’m fine, Harry. (PAUSE) Right kids I have to pop out for a while, I’ll be back before bedtime, don’t worry. So you two just stay here watch a film or play on the Wii, but do not leave this house. (EMPHISIS ON THE “DO NOT”)

HARRY

You mean we get to stay in the house on our own?

MOTHER

Yes, and your not to leave the house please promise me kids.

HARRY
I don’t want to babysit Georgia, what about the Johnston’s next door again?

MOTHER

Enough Harry, I don’t have time to argue! The Johnston’s have been wonderful but I can’t keep expecting them to come to my rescue every time I’m called into work – you’ll be fine for a few hours, just promise me you’ll stay put!

HARRY AND GEORGIA

I promise.

MOTHER

Good. Harry, look after your sister please. I won’t be long.

SFX: KISS THE CHILDREN, RATTLE OF KEYS, DOOR SHUT.

 

 

SCENE 3:

SFX: TELEVISION, WII SOUNDS, LAUGHTER.

 

HARRY

I win again, (EMPHESIS ON AGAIN) I’m bored. (DRAG THE WORD ‘BORED’)

GEORGIA

Me too, you always win, this game is rubbish. Shall we watch a film? … (PAUSE, WAITING FOR RESPONSE) … Harry?

SFX: TURN TELEVISION OFF, RUSTLE OF CLOTHES, COAT ZIP.

GEORGIA

What are you doing? Why are you putting your coat on? Mummy said we have to stay here, we promised.

HARRY

Yeah but she isn’t here and we’re bored, so we can just go to the park for five minutes, she will never know.

GEORGIA

But Harry we will be in trouble.

HARRY

Well I’m going to the park, I have to look after you so you can come with me or you can stay here on your own.

 

SFX: RATTLE OF DOOR LATCH

GEORGIA

Wait for me! (SHOUT)

SFX: ZIP OF COAT, DOOR SHUT.

 

SCENE 4:

SFX: DISTANT CARS, RUSTY SWINGS, BIRDSONG, OUTDOOR AMBIENCE.

GEORGIA

Push me higher Harry!

HARRY

No, it’s my go Georgia, stop hogging the swing.

SFX: OWL, CONTINUE DISTANT TRAFFIC.

HARRY

It’s getting dark, we should go. Mum might get home early…

SCENE 5:

SFX: WATER FROM A WATERING CAN.

 

OLD LADY (WITCH)

(TO SELF) That’s all the jobs done, was easier before Arthur passed away…

SFX: DISTANT CARS, RUSTY SWINGS, OUTDOOR AMBIENCE.

 

GEORGIA

Harry look at that house…looks like the cottage in my school play. See the shutters on the windows; they have gingerbread men cut out. Wow, lets go have a look!

 

SFX: FOOTSTEPS BEGIN TO FADE INTO DISTANT.

 

HARRY

Wait; don’t go any closer, there’s a woman. She might be like the witch. (TRYING TO SCARE GEORGIA INTO GOING HOME, SECRETLY UNCOMFORTABLE)

GEORGIA

Don’t be silly, that’s just a story…

SFX:FOOTSTEPS

Hello, I’m Georgia. I love your cottage….

SCENE 6:

SFX: KEYS UNLOCKING A DOOR, OPEN AND SHUT.

MOTHER

I’m back! (shout)…

SFX: FOOTSTEPS IN AND OUT ROOM, UP AND DOWN STAIRS.

 

Harry….Georgia (shout)

Stop mucking around! (tired)

Come out right now!!

SFX: FOOTSTEPS IN AND OUT ROOM, UP AND DOWN STAIRS.

Georgia…Harry! (panicked).

(gasp) their coats…shoes (panic).

SFX: DOOR OPENS, KNOCKING ON DOOR.

(OUT OF BREATH) Has Harry and Georgia been round?

NEIGHBOUR

No, is everything okay Katy?

MOTHER

I’m sure it’s fine, just their coats and shoes have gone too…. ermmm let me know if you see them.

SFX: DOOR OPENS, KNOCKING ON DOOR.

MOTHER

Are Georgia and Harry here?

NEIGHBOUR 2

No, sorry not seen them since we babysat yesterday.

MOTHER
Okay, thanks!

SFX: DOOR SHUT, PHONE BEEPING AS PRESSING BUTTONS.

 

MOTHER

Hello police…

SCENE 7:

SFX: OUTDOOR NIGHT AMBIENCE.

OLD WOMAN (WITCH)

Hello Georgia, i’m Shirley. (softly)

And who is this young man?

HARRY

I’m Harry and we are going…

GEORGIA

Your house looks like the cottage in my school play, im playing Gretel from Hansel and Gretel. I’m the lead so I have lots of words to remember. Have you heard the story?

OLD WOMAN (WITCH)

Oh yes, I think I still have the storybook. Do you want to come in and see?

HARRY

No we should go.

SFX: FOOTSTEPS, DOOR SHUT, CHAIN LOCK, FADED TELEVISION. (UNDERLAY DIALOUGE).

GEORGIA

Shut up Harry, do you have children Shirley?

OLD WOMAN (WITCH)

No I don’t (concerned)

GEORGIA

Are you on your own too? Our mummy doesn’t have a husband.

HARRY

Shut up Georgia.

OLD WOMAN (WITCH)

My husband died some years ago now. Look here this is my Arthur.

GEORGIA

Who’s the baby in that picture?

HARRY

Who cares…(under breath, muttered)

OLD WOMAN (WITCH)

Ah..well, thats my daughter, she died too at a young age. I love children, unfortunately I wasn’t lucky with having my own children.(pause) Harry you don’t seem happy, do you want some gingerbread men and a glass of pop?

HARRY

I’m not a child..maybe a glass of lemonade would be okay.

GEORGIA

Can I have a gingerbread man, pleaseeee?

SCENE 8:

SFX: OUTDOOR, NIGHT, PARK, DISTANT CARS.

MOTHER

Harry!!..Georgia!! (call out).

(panic) Have you seen two children, a girl and boy, about this height?…

(panic, out of breath) Have two children been on this park? A girl and boy?..i have a picture…see?

(gasp) Harry’s glove…do you know where the boy who was on this swing went?

SCENE 9;

SFX: FADED TELEVISION. (UNDERLAY DIALOUGE).

OLD WOMAN (WITCH)

There you go Harry a lemonade and a packet of crisps, much more grown up than gingerbread men.

GEORGIA

Have you got any games Shirley?

OLD WOMAN (WITCH)

Ah, how about a few games of dominos while you drink your drinks and finish your snacks, then you should head home, don’t want your mother worrying.

HARRY

Whats dominos? I bet I win, I always do.

OLD WOMAN (WITCH)

Well I will show you, however I am pretty good at dominos, I use to beat Arthur all the time.

GEORGIA

Do you miss Arthur, Shirley? I bet you get really lonely..do you struggle with bills like our mummy? You don’t look stressed like mummy does. Can I have another gingerbread man?

OLD WOMAN (WITCH)

Help yourself Georgia. You have a lot of questions for a young girl.

HARRY

Yeah and she doesn’t know when to shut up. (bitterly)